Poetry thread

[AiKirikaX]

come here and post your self made poetry...
or maybe you have found a nice one somewhere and want to share thm with us

post here

[Onisan]

by onisan
Listen
listen one
listen all
listen to the beat of your heart
to the rhythm in your soul
the melody of life
that is always of playing
there for all to hear
to whom have open hearts
that will share and play their own
to tell our soul
that there is someone for me and you
listening together
listen one
listen all
listen

[AiKirikaX]

nice DL ^^

[Onisan]

here is two poems I wrote about a friend where I live
My Heart
My heart belongs to someone
One whose beauty is uncomparable
With the heart of an Angel
The smile of a God
A presence that glows stronger than any star
My heart belongs to someone
One who knows not of my feelings
The feelings of a person who is neither good nor evil
A person of integrity seen by others
My heart belongs to someone
To whom my soul wishes to touch
With the love in my internal bliss
That has silent lips
My heart belongs to someone
Someone just like you

I See
When I look at you
I see an Angel
Kindness and Beauty
I see a person
Who fits in all parts of life
I see a hero
Who helps in the time of need
I see struggling and frustrated feelings
To be the best: yet is the best
I see overwhelming responsibility
Involved in everything
I see the question in your face
That asks why me
When I look at you
I see ever lasting beauty

[gogeta11]

deeletes pls

[Onisan]

its very good gogeta

[gogeta11]

thanks onisan ^^"
yours are really good. o.o you have skillz

[Zblade01]

....Gah....I came up with it in about ten minutes so dont expect anything great


I wanted to tell you
through this little rhyme
That to you i'll devote
nearly all of my time
U know that i love u
U know that its true
and u know that i'l do
nearly anything for you
my hearts a nervouse wreck
and my brain is shot
but my devotion to you
is all that i'v got
I'm hungry for love
and only yours will do
cause i know i'l never meet
another girl quite like you,
sometimes i wonder
If you feel the same
I dont wanna be the only one
playing this two-person game
I'm almost out of space
but i'm not ready to stop
cause if i dont tell you
i might just pop
I geuss that i'm done
i'm all out of time
so this is the end
of my 'love for u' rhyme

told u so-_-

[Zblade01]

Kudos Goge and Oni^_^

[AiKirikaX]

i like it Z...
its very nice ^^

*creativity = 0* @.@

[Onisan]

I like it Z, it had a lot rhymes, rhyming poems r my favorite kind of poems, thouse and the ones that come from the heart.
Here is one when I was little before I turned into what I am today.
Welcoming Death
I welcome death
Like an old friend from the distanced past
With the gates of heaven open to me
Nobody to hold me to this earth
I welcome death
To whom all will visit one day
With a gripe of soulless fingers
That fills you with an icy chill
I welcome death
With open arms
To have no emotion towards death
But to rejoice for those in heaven
That I will one day rejoin once again
From the almighty
I welcome death

[Sabaku_no_Gaara]

..... to think id write poetry ...... hmm not in my taste ...

[AiKirikaX]

i like them all ^^

[viperzfury]

ok I will give this a try ^^

To The One I Love

Your perfume is the thing I long to smell
because it tells me your near
Your face is the thing I long to see
because it is the greatest art of all
Your voice is the thing I long to hear
because it sounds like music to my ears
Your kiss is the thing I long to taste
because they are so sweet
Your hug is the thing I long to feel
because its a touch of heaven
and whenever you are not around
I find it hard to feel at all

I hope you all like it and one day maybe one day I can give it to the person it is for ^^

[Ryuku]

wow, dragon, gogeta and viperz are amazing at poetry o.o

[Onisan]

I like it viperz, and to give u some advice if u r ever going to give it to that special person, don't wait to long, or else it will disappear from u. I finally gave my poems to one I care about, and to think this weekend I am taking her to the prom, with a red rose as a gift.

[viperzfury]

ah thanks for the advice dragon and I am glad to hear that ^^

[Zblade01]

I told u all not to expect very much...so far i'm the worst poet here Xp....but you guys are pretty good....

[Zblade01]

More poetry thought up on the spot =p

I'm at the buttom desperately inching my way up
Trying to reach the top
but your holding me down like a wieght on my back
...or maybe i just dont want to let you go?
I dont want to reach the top alone
so il become stronger...
strong enough to carry you with me
I just hope u want to come with me
If not then i'll stay
i'll sit at the bottom with you
Until the day ure ready to come along
...because u are the wieght that made me stronger




I dont know if its any good...so plz go easy on meh Q_Q

[Ryuku]

Z it was good, but please dont triple post xD

[gogeta11]

my damaged soul walks this earth.
the tearing of the walls inside
the terrible moment has arrived
the tearing of my soul
the crushing of my bones
the crackling sounds go through the night
my death tonight
brings all in sight
the souls existince just a line
the cutting of the thread that holds
the souls existince as is told
the opening of the wounds inside
the soul tears and neve thrives
existince without all that holds
the few things that keep from the cold
as this world sees it last day
the cold invades this empty place
and lets it die.. in peace and grace.

--------------------------------------------------
the dagger dangels near
teasing ... comeing ever closer
the blades edge
shineing in its sharpened glory
its final use come to pass
the blade sinking ever deeper
The bodies pains comeing to life
the last breath releasing life
the blade has done its job
the body ridget... left alone

it was good Z ^^

[Nieko]

*applauds at oni's,goge's and viperz poems*

[AiKirikaX]

like i said... i like them all
^^
i wished i had the talent for that too...

*moves topic*

[Sabaku_no_Gaara]

yes nice poetry .... why dont you write it as a full time work xD

[SnowNeji]

Boredom ~by me
There's nothing to do.
Nothing to write.
Nothing to even work on or even smite.
Everything is lifeless.
In my peaceful little city.
Everything is quiet, even every judge and committee.
No homework to do.
I can't stir up trouble.
Even my friends and I together still have fun like dead, lifeless puddles.

~making up poetry is fun come to think of it. o.o

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